English homework

The tornado is coming, tearing through the land like a cheetah running the wild. The sound was too loud you blocked your ears; you could still hear it, like a jet. It was amazing watching this thing smashing through the country side like a romantic movie which turned into a horror.
I remember seeing the little children on the play ground, fleeing like mice; it sounded it too with the squeaks in their voices. Their faces were to horrible to look at, flashing from side to side with terror written across them. The tornado people that chased them came flying along like out of the movie twister. The look on their face has such expression with all the rage and adrenalin shooting their veins. It was like a kid on their birthday. Excitement steaming out of their ears, the sky had been practically covered with the wind and loose materials flying around and across me. It was like someone had turned the world upside down and inside out. Nothing was there, the holes the tornado created were massive you could plant trees into the holes that were drilled into the earth. The quickness was amazing the speed was like a jet weaving through the sky. The size this tornado had got to was massive. As tall as a 20 story building and as wide as a tree upside down.
This terror had completely destroyed everything in its path with houses to sheds and roads it was a major destruction. People were homeless, looking for lost goods just trying to find something to mind them of their home. After the storm of immense rain and lightning strikes like a flick of a switch. The sky was so dark it was black sheet that clothed the sky.